From 9a33e97a5022e2b587ae98eb1addaf97a4fea52b Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Janne Koschinski <janne@kuschku.de>
Date: Sun, 18 Feb 2018 23:59:58 +0100
Subject: [PATCH] Grammatical changes
---
privacy-policy/index.html | 8 +++++---
privacy-policy/index.pug | 12 ++++++++----
2 files changed, 13 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-)
diff --git a/privacy-policy/index.html b/privacy-policy/index.html
index c41050b..6b45445 100644
--- a/privacy-policy/index.html
+++ b/privacy-policy/index.html
@@ -2,9 +2,11 @@
</style></head><body class="noscript releases" id="page-index"><noscript><style>img[data-src] {
display: none !important;
}</style></noscript><script>document.body.classList.remove("noscript");</script><div class="pusher"><div class="full height"><div class="following bar"><div class="ui container"><div class="ui large secondary menu inverted"><a class="view-ui item active" href="/"><img class="ui logo left" src="/assets/images/icon.svg">QuasselDroid</a><a class="view-ui item" href="/docs/">Docs</a><div class="right menu"><a class="view-ui item" href="https://github.com/sandsmark/QuasselDroid"><i class="icon github left"></i><span class="text">GitHub</span></a><a class="view-ui item" href="/releases/"><i class="icon download left"></i><span class="text">Download</span></a></div></div></div></div><div class="ui vertical stripe intro segment"><div class="ui stackable very relaxed center aligned grid container"><div class="row"><div class="column left aligned"><h2 class="ui header">Privacy Policy</h2><h3 class="ui header">Website</h3><p>While visiting our website, your computer transmits various pieces of data to our website. These vary based
-on browser and operating system, and usually include</p><ul class="ui list"><li>Browser and version</li><li>Operating system and version</li><li>The previously visited website (Referrer URL)</li><li>Hostname and/or IP address of your computer</li><li>Time and date of the access</li></ul><p>At the current time, we do not collect or store any of this information.
-</p><h3 class="ui header">App</h3><p>The app supports a functionality to automatically report crashes. At the current time, all crash reporting
-functionality is disabled, and no reports will be collected.
+on browser and operating system, and usually include:</p><ul class="ui list"><li>Browser and version</li><li>Operating system and version</li><li>The previously visited website (Referrer URL)</li><li>Hostname and/or IP address of your computer</li><li>Time and date of the access</li></ul><p>We currently do not store of collect any of this information.
+</p><h3 class="ui header">App</h3><p>The app supports a functionality to automatically report crashes. Currently, crash reporting is disabled and
+no reports will be collected.
+</p><p>Connections made by the app to a server configured by the user are subject to the privacy policy of that
+server, and cannot be policed by us.
</p><h3 class="ui header">Further Questions
</h3><p>For further questions regarding our privacy policy, please contact
<a href="mailto:support@kuschku.de">support@kuschku.de</a>.</p></div></div></div></div></div><div class="ui black inverted vertical footer segment"><div class="ui center aligned container"><div class="ui stackable inverted grid"><div class="three wide column"><h4 class="ui inverted header">Community</h4><div class="ui inverted link list"><a class="item" href="https://www.transifex.com/quasseldroid/quasseldroid/">Help Translate</a><a class="item" href="https://github.com/sandsmark/quasseldroid/issues/">Submit an Issue</a><a class="item" href="irc://chat.freenode.org/#quasseldroid">Join our Chat</a><a class="item" href="/docs/">Documentation</a><a class="item" href="/privacy-policy/">Privacy Policy</a></div></div><div class="three wide column"><h4 class="ui inverted header">Discover More</h4><div class="ui inverted link list"><a class="item" href="http://quassel-irc.org/">Quassel</a><a class="item" href="https://github.com/magne4000/quassel-webserver/">quassel-webserver</a><a class="item" href="https://github.com/phhusson/quassel-irssi">quassel-irssi</a><a class="item" href="https://woboq.com/iquassel.html">iQuassel</a></div></div></div><div class="ui inverted section divider"></div><img class="ui centered mini image" src="/assets/images/icon.svg"><div class="ui horizontal inverted small divided link list"><a class="item" href="https://github.com/sandsmark/QuasselDroid">Free & Open Source
diff --git a/privacy-policy/index.pug b/privacy-policy/index.pug
index 2014ad6..5c8bd28 100644
--- a/privacy-policy/index.pug
+++ b/privacy-policy/index.pug
@@ -12,7 +12,7 @@ block content
Website
p.
While visiting our website, your computer transmits various pieces of data to our website. These vary based
- on browser and operating system, and usually include
+ on browser and operating system, and usually include:
ul.ui.list
li.
Browser and version
@@ -25,13 +25,17 @@ block content
li.
Time and date of the access
p.
- At the current time, we do not collect or store any of this information.
+ We currently do not store of collect any of this information.
h3.ui.header.
App
p.
- The app supports a functionality to automatically report crashes. At the current time, all crash reporting
- functionality is disabled, and no reports will be collected.
+ The app supports a functionality to automatically report crashes. Currently, crash reporting is disabled and
+ no reports will be collected.
+
+ p.
+ Connections made by the app to a server configured by the user are subject to the privacy policy of that
+ server, and cannot be policed by us.
h3.ui.header.
Further Questions
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