Updated phrasing

privacy-policy/content.md

@@ -23,20 +23,20 @@ These are only visible to you and administrators.
 
 ### ik8r / ik8r.eu
 
-This site only stores your uploaded images you chose to provide, as well as their original filename and upload time and
-date. You can delete your uploaded images at your own choice.
+This site only stores your uploaded images you chose to provide, as well as their original filename as well as upload
+time and date. You can delete your uploaded images at your own choice.
 
 ### Seafile / cloud.kuschku.de
 
-This site stores the files you chose to upload, as well as their modification history. You can at any time delete them
+This site stores the files you chose to upload, as well as their modification history. You can delete them at any time
 via the application or webinterface.
 
 ### Quassel Cloud / quassel.kuschku.de
 
-Only your chat logs you decided to keep are stored, you can at any time delete these.
+Only your chat logs you decided to keep are stored, you can delete these at any time.
 
-We currently collect and store your IP address and account you log into for up to 2 weeks to be able to analyze active
-security threats, these logs are not transferred to any third party.
+We currently collect and store IP address and account for every login for up to 2 weeks to be able to analyze active
+security threats. These logs are not transferred to any third party.
 
 ### Further Questions
 

privacy-policy/index.html

@@ -19,15 +19,15 @@ only visible to you.</p>
 <p>For the purpose of identifying account hijackings the past 14 days of logins are also stored with time and IP address.
 These are only visible to you and administrators.</p>
 <h3>ik8r / ik8r.eu</h3>
-<p>This site only stores your uploaded images you chose to provide, as well as their original filename and upload time and
-date. You can delete your uploaded images at your own choice.</p>
+<p>This site only stores your uploaded images you chose to provide, as well as their original filename as well as upload
+time and date. You can delete your uploaded images at your own choice.</p>
 <h3>Seafile / cloud.kuschku.de</h3>
-<p>This site stores the files you chose to upload, as well as their modification history. You can at any time delete them
+<p>This site stores the files you chose to upload, as well as their modification history. You can delete them at any time
 via the application or webinterface.</p>
 <h3>Quassel Cloud / quassel.kuschku.de</h3>
-<p>Only your chat logs you decided to keep are stored, you can at any time delete these.</p>
-<p>We currently collect and store your IP address and account you log into for up to 2 weeks to be able to analyze active
-security threats, these logs are not transferred to any third party.</p>
+<p>Only your chat logs you decided to keep are stored, you can delete these at any time.</p>
+<p>We currently collect and store IP address and account for every login for up to 2 weeks to be able to analyze active
+security threats. These logs are not transferred to any third party.</p>
 <h3>Further Questions</h3>
 <p>For further questions, to request an export of your data, or to request a deletion of all data about you, please contact
 <a href="mailto:support@kuschku.de">support@kuschku.de</a>.</p>